Talk:MRD:Stella
Good report. See my inline comments for details.
A personal note: Your writing style is unnecessarily verbose. You don't need this to show that you have a good understanding of the subject, that is clear to me with far less writing. Sometimes, giving a 2 paragraph answer to a question that requires only a couple of phrases is detrimental both for you and the reader. For the reader, because it hides the answer from him for far too long. For you, because it can actually make you forget what the question was all about. For example, you give a long-winded answer to the first question, with a wealth of details, to finally get it wrong.
Please, don't take this as a personal critique -- I repeat, your report is excellent. But consider my comments for your future writings. Reports of results in science (be it in wiki forms, thesis or publications) should be succinct and to the point.