Talk:Mod:yukiching
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Cyclopentadiene
God energies. But what do the angles shown in your Jmol signify? You do not discuss them at all! More explanation of what kinetic control is, its origins, and what it means here.
Taxol
Your energies are good, but there is no detail as to all the other conformations one can get. There are two chairs for each, and two twist boats. What were their energies? The discussion is very short, too short, particularly about hyperstable alkenes
NMR
Agaoin almost no detail. You do not attempt to compare the lit value with your calculation in any sense other than "Hence,the differences between t the predicted value and the literature are acceptable. "
Epoxides
= X-ray
You quote three anomeric effects but do not really analyse each separately. Thus "The lone pair on one of the oxygen is free to donate" needs more information about the orientation of that lone pair with respect to the C-O bond. Little on Jacobsen.
NMR
No comparison at all with the literature that I can find. this is an essential part of the expt.
OR
What are your literature references here? All these compounds have multiple lit refs, you quote only one for each. "t may be cause by the difference in temperature, solvent and enantiometric excess. " Probably none of these. It is your calculations that are probably at fault.
"DCE" (should be ECD) analysis rather pointless because of a lack of chromophore.
TS
You should convert K to ee in your analysis, since the latter is what is measured.
NCI and QTAIM
Nothing new here, you are merely quoting what the course instructions say! I want you to put YOUR thoughts into this, not mine.
New Candidate
Why did you suggest this?
Overall, you have put far too little detail into your analysis, doing sometimes the bare minimum.