Talk:COOKIESANDCREAM

Cpd dimers: Good outline of the differences between dimer energies. Hmmm, missing a reference here are we? Good discussion of thermo/kinetic control.

Taxol: Twist coat? Is this a new type of conformer I’ve never heard of? Why just chair and twist boat? Where’s the boat conformation? “Stabler:” is not a word, “more stable” is the phrase you were looking for. Not a bad answer though.

Carbene: Good to see you caught the PM6 symmetry bug. Where’s the analysis though?

Glycosidation: Your energies look okay but again, where’s the discussion or analysis?

Mini-project: This is not a finished piece of work. You essentially state this at the end. Poor effort.

Overall: Nice name, however, it doesn’t quite make up for the lack of an introduction. Could have been proofed a little better as well (Hint: I find that initially labelling references, figure or table numbers as XX and then searching the document for XX before you submit is an easy way to be sure you’ve correctly inserted everything). It feels like you really ran out of time after taxol. If you don’t offer any discussion or analysis I can’t give you marks.